hi beyond
I am glad to see your reply.
For your advices, though I agree with it, I still wanna say something more.
you know, language is just a tool ,which used for communication.
So I think the grammer is not very important on the promise
that the other guys can understand your meaning,.
By the way,compare with the complex sentenses, the simple ones is more useful for the reader,
For the mistakes you meationed above, I have corrected them and hope you can check it for me.
At last I still need to say thank you again and hope to be your friend.
May your national day be filled with happiness.
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本帖最后由 kevin0509 于 2007-9-30 23:38 编辑 ]